
George Gopen doesn't only dance, sing, and do stand up comedy in
one act on stage. Using his amazing charisma, humor, examples from
a wide variety of topics, and in depth knowledge of his content
area, writing, he engages hundreds of busy health services,
clinical, and public health researchers for a full day on the topic
of commas, colons, and semi-colons. A professor from Duke, Dr.
Gopen has been a professional writing consultant for 26
years. He is the author of several books and leads workshops and
individual writer trainigns throughout the country. His article in
American Scientist on "The Science of Scientific
Writing," is among the top, most read aticles of this
journal.
As an appetizer, here are some thoughts of his work that you can
access for free here:
http://www.americanscientist.org/issues/pub/the-science-of-scientific-writing
"Science is often hard to read. Most people assume that its
difficulties are born out of necessity, out of the extreme
complexity of scientific concepts, data and analysis. We argue here
that complexity of thought need not lead to impenetrability of
expression; we demonstrate a number of rhetorical principles that
can produce clarity in communication without oversimplifying
scientific issues. The results are substantive, not merely
cosmetic: Improving the quality of writing actually improves the
quality of thought."
"The fundamental purpose of scientific discourse is not
the mere presentation of information and thought, but rather its
actual communication. It does not matter how pleased an author
might be to have converted all the right data into sentences and
paragraphs; it matters only whether a large majority of the reading
audience accurately perceives what the author had in mind.
Therefore, in order to understand how best to improve writing, we
would do well to understand better how readers go about
reading."
"A research article, for example, is generally
divided into recognizable sections, sometimes labeled Introduction,
Experimental Methods, Results and Discussion. When the sections are
confused-when too much experimental detail is found in the Results
section, or when discussion and results intermingle-readers are
often equally confused. In smaller units of discourse the
functional divisions are not so explicitly labeled, but readers
have definite expectations all the same, and they search for
certain information in particular places. If these structural
expectations are continually violated, readers are forced to divert
energy from understanding the content of a passage to unraveling
its structure. As the complexity of the context increases
moderately, the possibility of misinterpretation or
noninterpretation increases dramatically."
(Excerpts from The Science of Scientific Writing If the reader is to grasp
what the writer means, the writer must understand what the reader
needs by George Gopen and Judith Swan published in 1990 in
American Scientist)
Borsika
Rabin
Staff Researcher/Research Coordinator
KPCO